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Please fill in the information below to make a territory request.

	Territory ID and proposed name
	The Territory ID (from OpenGeofiction:Territories, e.g. AR123a) and proposed name of the country

The territory that me and legoman want is AR120-87. We would like to call it New Cantino. It is a part of the federal states of Archanta.

	Physical geography
	An overview of climate, topography and landscape of the country. It is advised to also create a sketch, you can add a link to this (hosted on imgur or similar)

The State will be flat, with a large mountain range in the middle. The mountain range will push the clouds up and make it rain alot on the western side of the mountains. On the north coast there is a small mangrove swamp. There will be two main rivers, The northern main river will run through the main city and end in a delta. The second one runs into another state and goes through their biggest city. The northern coast is a tropical rain forest while the middle coast is a subtropical rain forest. The south is a temperate plains with river everywhere. Here is a link to my design: https://imgur.com/a/LC0eMEy

	Human geography
	A brief description of the territory demographics, economic development, land occupation, infrastructure and mapping style

Our state will have around 2 million people. It will be a rich country with lots of land for farming on the plains. It will have a main freeway on the coast, with other highways crisscrossing the interiour, connecting with highways from other states.

	History & culture
	A brief description of the intended culture and language

Our state will have lots of cultures. The country will be a popular holiday destination during the summer months. The main language will be Ingerish. In 1873 An explorer coming from the interior of the country discovered the area in which the capital now lays.

	Past mapping
	To support your request provide links to areas of OGF mapping which showcase your mapping skill. Mapping relevant to the requested theme & geography is especially useful
	The {{coord}} template can optionally be used to link to the OGF map - it results in a nice formatted link. Or you can paste in a URL.

This is where me and legoman mainly map: Benderth - Sandalos Area

	Username & date
	Sign and date the application by typing four tildes like this: ~~~~

Alomico (talk) 07:20, 13 April 2024 (UTC)

	Discussion
	Discussion for clarification & decision

Just so you know, AR120-87 is a constituent state of the Federal States of Archanta project, and is not an independent nation. Accordingly, please update your application to acknowledge this and try to understand how this state would fit in with the rest of the nation. Alternatively, you're welcome to reapply for a different territory elsewhere. --TheMayor (talk) 16:10, 13 April 2024 (UTC)

Hi, unfortunately your application isn't detailed enough to really be considered - it needs more information and the sketch should be based upon the OGF map and show land use. The geography feels different from what is currently mapped, but how does that interact with neighbouring states? It's also really hard to evaluate your mapping level, as there a few mappers active in the same area. So, can I suggest BG13^∈^⊾ instead? This would allow you both space to demonstrate your concept, while also allowing opportunity for a fully proposal to be written in time. If a subsequent application is successful then mapping could be moved. Thanks/wangi (talk) 08:09, 17 April 2024 (UTC)

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 {{Territory application id and name}}
-The territory that i want is '''AR120-87. I would like to call it New Cantino. It is a part of the federal states of archanta.'''
+The territory that me and [https://opengeofiction.net/user/Legoman legoman] want is '''AR120-87. We would like to call it New Cantino. It is a part of the federal states of Archanta.'''
 {{territory application physical geography}}
-My State will be flat, with a large tablelands in the middle surrounded by hills. There will be one main river that will flow through the main city. The flat bit will be warm and humid, while the mountains will be dry and cold. Under the mountains will be a small temperate plain. The mountains will have snow. Here is a link to my deisgn: https://imgur.com/a/vcClAI4
+The State will be flat, with a large mountain range in the middle. The mountain range will push the clouds up and make it rain alot on the western side of the mountains. On the north coast there is a small mangrove swamp. There will be two main rivers, The northern main river will run through the main city and end in a delta. The second one runs into another state and goes through their biggest city. The northern coast is a tropical rain forest while the middle coast is a subtropical rain forest. The south is a temperate plains with river everywhere. Here is a link to my design: https://imgur.com/a/LC0eMEy
 {{territory application human geography}}
-My state will have around 2 million peole. It will be a rich country with lots of land for farming on the plains. It will have a main freeway on the coast, with other highways crisscorssing the interiour, connecting with highways from other states.
+Our state will have around 2 million people. It will be a rich country with lots of land for farming on the plains. It will have a main freeway on the coast, with other highways crisscrossing the interiour, connecting with highways from other states.
 {{territory application history and culture}}
-My state will have lots of cultures. The main language will be english with some spanish mixed in. It was started in 1853 by a explorer.
+Our state will have lots of cultures. The country will be a popular holiday destination during the summer months. The main language will be Ingerish. In 1873 An explorer coming from the interior of the country discovered the area in which the capital now lays.
 {{territory application past mapping}}
-This is where i mainly map: {{Coord|name=Benderth - Sandalos Area|zoom=13|latitude=-26.4096|longitude=146.2054}}
+This is where me and legoman mainly map: {{Coord|name=Benderth - Sandalos Area|zoom=13|latitude=-26.4096|longitude=146.2054}}
 {{territory application username and date}}
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 * Just so you know, AR120-87 is a constituent state of the [[Collab:Federal States|Federal States of Archanta]] project, and is not an independent nation. Accordingly, please update your application to acknowledge this and try to understand how this state would fit in with the rest of the nation. Alternatively, you're welcome to reapply for a different territory elsewhere. --[[User:TheMayor|TheMayor]] ([[User talk:TheMayor|talk]]) 16:10, 13 April 2024 (UTC)
+* Hi, unfortunately your application isn't detailed enough to really be considered - it needs more information and the sketch should be based upon the OGF map and show land use. The geography feels different from what is currently mapped, but how does that interact with neighbouring states? It's also really hard to evaluate your mapping level, as there a few mappers active in the same area. So, can I suggest {{relation|271204|BG13}} instead? This would allow you both space to demonstrate your concept, while also allowing opportunity for a fully proposal to be written in time. If a subsequent application is successful then mapping could be moved. Thanks/[[User:Wangi|wangi]] ([[User talk:Wangi|talk]]) 08:09, 17 April 2024 (UTC)
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