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{{territory application discussion}}Just a minor note. As you probably know, [https://opengeofiction.net/relation/405 TA031 (Sirrhae)] is already [https://opengeofiction.net/user/Imperator Imperator's territory] (previously known as Moskva), so our request is for an expansion, as stated in the title. If you have any additional questions, let us know. [[User:Mapping Expert|Mapping Expert]] ([[User talk:Mapping Expert|talk]]) 18:42, 4 December 2022 (UTC)
{{territory application discussion}}Just a minor note. As you probably know, [https://opengeofiction.net/relation/405 TA031 (Sirrhae)] is already [https://opengeofiction.net/user/Imperator Imperator's territory] (previously known as Moskva), so our request is for an expansion, as stated in the title. If you have any additional questions, let us know. [[User:Mapping Expert|Mapping Expert]] ([[User talk:Mapping Expert|talk]]) 18:42, 4 December 2022 (UTC)
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Hi,


While I can understand your plans are both ambitious and expansive, it seems  overzealous to immediately then request for 5 territories to be merged; especially considering your pre-existing projects in mapping -- while Imperium's scale makes it hard to comment; Costa Dorada appears to be of a similar mapping style; an exciting focus on large-scale mapping with ''very'' little focus on detail. For this reason, I'm incredibly hesitant to provide an additional 4 territories to the both of you -- especially while there is already a territory which you are mapping in. Additionally, I raise my eyebrows at the "modern Egyptian" style inspirations you provided, and hope the Bolas horns from Amonkhet won't make an entrance on OGF... but I do applaud the overall ideas outlined, as for using a language based on ancient Egyptian, and making use of the overall outline of ancient Egyptian cities... but perhaps leave sphinxes, pyramids and generally the Egyptian pantheon out, except as forlorn monuments, as in modern Egypt.


Given the above, I not convinced there's any need to grant this request - I think what's being done in TA031 is a good start, but expanding the territory at this stage seems hasty and unnecessary. Much rather would I see the territory slowly grow over time, as the space is being filled with quality mapping. I'll mark Mapping Expert as a co-mapper in TA031. [[User:Taka|Taka]] ([[User talk:Taka|talk]]) 11:29, 8 December 2022 (UTC)
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ForumsTerritory application → Territory application/TA026c - Ta Seti


Please fill in the information below to make a territory request.
Noun Project Signature icon 619326 cc.svgTerritory ID and proposed name
The Territory ID (from OpenGeofiction:Territories, e.g. AR123a) and proposed name of the country


TA022c, TA022b, TA023, TA018 - Ta Seti (expansion of TA031)

Noun Project Map icon 1463108.svgPhysical geography
An overview of climate, topography and landscape of the country. It is advised to also create a sketch, you can add a link to this (hosted on imgur or similar)


Most of the Ta Seti's territory contains scrubland and desert as currently is. One mayor change would be to create a river running on an east-west axis toward current "Haez". It is expected that there is a medium elevation (not higher than 3000 meters), which is found in the intermediate zones and in the most distant zones of the expected country. It is planned to largely follow the existing geography, with major changes to ensure credibility and better quality. Feel free to watch our proposal for the river network in northern Tarephia here.

Invest - The Noun Project.svgHuman geography
A brief description of the territory demographics, economic development, land occupation, infrastructure and mapping style

Details about the human geography of Ta Seti are as follows:

  • Territory demographics. The coastal areas are expected to be more densely populated, with the area near the capital (which will be located in the area where Haez is) with the largest population. The areas that are located further from the coast have a relatively smaller population and, of this group, it is concentrated near the river that flows towards the capital (https://opengeofiction.net/#map=10/21.6032/29.1399&layers=B).
  • Economic development. Historically, Ta Seti's economy is based on agriculture, livestock and the exchange of goods (trade); furthermore, in contrast to Ancient Egypt, there is an important fishing activity that takes place between the territories requested for the expected country. The country's infrastructure is relatively archaic and the most modern elements are only used on the coasts and more populated areas.
  • Land occupation. As presented in the previous section, most of the territory will be covered with desert and semi-arid areas. The remaining territory will present a variety of landuses and ecosystems, until reaching more fertile areas on the coast (slightly suitable for more consistent agriculture).
  • Infrastructure and mapping style. Ta Seti is expected to be similar to a modern version of Ancient Egypt, with minor elements coming from Mediterranean areas of the Middle East and Greece. The pyramids (mostly mausoleums/burial monuments) and characteristic Ancient Egyptian temples are expected to be well-present and preserved, as they would not have been abandoned or neglected. We plan to use existing references on the structure of Egyptian cities as inspiration for mapping, We also plan to introduce alternative versions of a modern Ancient Egypt, developed by illustrators on the Internet (example 1 - example 2 - example 3 - example 4 - example 5).
Noun Project languages icon 105908 cc.svgHistory & culture
A brief description of the intended culture and language


The language used is mostly a latinization of ancient Egyptian based on Budge's dictionary of 1920, with some added Punic and Greek vocabulary added whenever vocabulary in AE is non-existant. Also a genitive form was added for facility in name creation. It is expected to base the predominant culture of the territory on Ancient Egypt, with certain elements obtained from classical Greek and Punic; consequently, they are expected to have a similar historical chronology but altered to allow for the prevalence of the culture.

Noun Project drawing icon 2123401.svgPast mapping
To support your request provide links to areas of OGF mapping which showcase your mapping skill. Mapping relevant to the requested theme & geography is especially useful
The {{coord}} template can optionally be used to link to the OGF map - it results in a nice formatted link. Or you can paste in a URL.

From Mapping Expert and Imperator:

Noun Project Signature icon 619326 cc.svgUsername & date
Sign and date the application by typing four tildes like this: ~~~~


Mapping Expert (talk) 18:37, 4 December 2022 (UTC)

Noun project 579150 Conversation.svgDiscussion
Discussion for clarification & decision

Just a minor note. As you probably know, TA031 (Sirrhae) is already Imperator's territory (previously known as Moskva), so our request is for an expansion, as stated in the title. If you have any additional questions, let us know. Mapping Expert (talk) 18:42, 4 December 2022 (UTC)



Hi,

While I can understand your plans are both ambitious and expansive, it seems overzealous to immediately then request for 5 territories to be merged; especially considering your pre-existing projects in mapping -- while Imperium's scale makes it hard to comment; Costa Dorada appears to be of a similar mapping style; an exciting focus on large-scale mapping with very little focus on detail. For this reason, I'm incredibly hesitant to provide an additional 4 territories to the both of you -- especially while there is already a territory which you are mapping in. Additionally, I raise my eyebrows at the "modern Egyptian" style inspirations you provided, and hope the Bolas horns from Amonkhet won't make an entrance on OGF... but I do applaud the overall ideas outlined, as for using a language based on ancient Egyptian, and making use of the overall outline of ancient Egyptian cities... but perhaps leave sphinxes, pyramids and generally the Egyptian pantheon out, except as forlorn monuments, as in modern Egypt.

Given the above, I not convinced there's any need to grant this request - I think what's being done in TA031 is a good start, but expanding the territory at this stage seems hasty and unnecessary. Much rather would I see the territory slowly grow over time, as the space is being filled with quality mapping. I'll mark Mapping Expert as a co-mapper in TA031. Taka (talk) 11:29, 8 December 2022 (UTC)